Couple of minor things:
- maybe clarify what "FUD" means ("common concerns addressed" maybe)
- somewhere mention that **no matter how much bitcoin someone has**, they can't change the rules nor get special treatment. all they can do is send some to someone else. (I often get the "but lots of sketchy people are going to control bitcoin by hoarding so much of it!" comment from progressive friends)
- most people probably don't know what "low time preference" is
- include Square in the "business" section as well as the "FUD" section where you mention how many merchants accept bitcoin now