ok, I read it. It took me longer than 15min, but that's because I can't control my eyeballs, and they like to wander ;)
Imho it's very good read, I got goose bumps twice near the end. The twist is great.
I took some notes where possible areas for improvement might be. Expect a DM soon.
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Thank YOU Tony ๐โก really appreciated. Looking forward to your suggestions.