In “Who Monitors The Monitors” after seeing images of alternate dream stories where “D.G.” & I are experiencing life in ways more than the dance club setting we’re trapped in, I see her tears then later on her knees weeping. I try to describe the images as the reason for her tears. #writingcommunity
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Writers, describe a passage from your writing where you are trying to make the reader feel sorrow or loss, and how you went about doing it. | Minds
...re trying to make the reader feel sorrow or loss, and how you went about doing it..
