When the scene is taking way too long to get moving for plot pacing and/or overall story progression. As much as I want to paint a scene with as many descriptors as possible I don’t want the reader to stumbling along as if waiting for paint to dry. #writingcommunity
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Writers, tell me about why you might omit additional details when writing a scene, all other things being equal. | Minds
...ils when writing a scene, all other things being equal..
